Bernie said impatiently.
"The one I sent you is my first."
Bernie closed his eyes tightly as if he were telepathically signaling his girl: Five minutes! Not ten! "So, you any good?" he asked.
Peter wondered about that question. He'd sent the script two weeks ago. Hadn't Bernie read it?
To Peter, his script was like a sacred text, imbued with a quasimagical aura. He had poured his soul into its creation and he kept a copy prominently displayed on his writing desk, three-hole-punched with shiny brass brads, his first completed opus. Every morning on his way out the door, he touched the cover as one might finger an amulet or stroke the belly of a Buddha. It was his ticket to another life, and he was eager to get it punched. Moreover, the subject matter was important to him, a paean, as he saw it, to life and fate. As a student, he had been deeply moved by The Bridge of San Luis Rey , Thornton Wilder's novel about five strangers who perished together on a collapsing bridge. Naturally, when he started his new job in Nevada he began to dwell on the notions of fate and predestination. He chose to craft a modern take on the classic tale where--in his version--the strangers' lives intersected at the instant of a terror attack. Bernie got his tea, "Thank you, honey. Keep an eye out for my next meeting, okay?" Roz cleared Peter's line of sight and winked at her boss.
"Well, I think it's good," Peter answered. "Did you have a chance to look at it?"
Bernie hadn't read a script in decades. Other people read scripts for him and gave him notes--coverage.
"Yeah, yeah, I got my notes right here." He opened the folder with Peter's coverage and scanned the two-pager.
Weak plot.
Terrible dialogue.
Poor character development, etc., etc.
Recommendation: pass.
Bernie stayed in character, smiled expansively and asked, "So tell me, Peter, how is it you know Victor Kemp?"
A month earlier, Peter Benedict walked into the Constellation with a hopeful spring to his step. He preferred the Constellation over any casino on the Strip. It was the only one with a whiff of intellectual content, and furthermore, he had been an astronomy buff as a boy. The planetarium dome of the grand casino had a perpetually shifting laser display of the night sky over Las Vegas, exactly as it would appear if you stuck your head outside while someone turned off the hundreds of millions of lightbulbs and fifteen thousand miles of neon tubing that washed out the heavens. If you looked carefully, came often enough, and were a student of the subject, over time you could spot each of the eighty-eight constellations. The Big Dipper, Orion, Andromeda--a piece of cake. Peter had found the obscure ones too: Corvus, Delphinus, Eridanas, Sextens. In fact, he only lacked Coma Berineces, Berineces' Hair, a faint cluster in the northern sky sandwiched between Canes Venatici and Virgo. One day he would find that too.
He was playing blackjack at a high-stakes table, minimum bet per hand $100, maximum $5,000, his baldness covered by a Lakers baseball cap. He almost never exceeded the minimum but preferred these tables because the spectacle was more interesting. He was a good, disciplined player who usually ended an evening a few hundred up, but every so often he left a thousand richer or poorer, depending on the streakiness of the cards. The real thrills flowed his way vicariously, watching the big money players juggling three hands, splitting, doubling down, risking fifteen, twenty grand at a time. He would have loved pumping out that kind of adrenaline but knew it wasn't going to happen--not on his salary.
The dealer, a Hungarian named Sam, saw that he wasn't having a good night and tried to cheer him up. "Don't worry, Peter, luck will change. You will see."
He didn't think so. The shoe had a count of minus fifteen, highly favoring the house. Yet, that knowledge didn't change his play, even though any reasonable card-counter would have backed off for a while, come back in when
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